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Thursday, 27 August 2015

nabilas speech

This term we are learning to write a persuasive speech. My goals are to make eye contact and speak louder              

nothing was good for my speech because i did not persuade miss percy  that we should not have cell phones at school

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  2. Hi Nabila,

    I disagree with your statement. You had used some persuasive features and sentence starters in your speech, but to make it MORE persuasive you needed to expand on your ideas.

    - Miss Percy.

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  3. HI there i am Nabila i just want to say hat school are you from

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